I saw it fly right across the shop and then it just flew again to the landfill then it flew and flipped it just flew and flew and flew! It went to the road and then the FOREST!!! Then the big beast was out, out of his cave he was out because of that annoying thing. But it was something magical and mysterious. It tickled the big beast and then he was FLYING in the air then he said in a big beast voice. "Why am i flying, wow I just shot a firing flaming ball" "I should name it the flaming ball’ . He did a flip and a loopy loop then he glided he was so impressed by it but then the magic stopped. He got rumbled down to the ground the beast was so mad he was going to smash it but when he smashed it then it said "thanks for the wind" it continued then it went to the sewers in it was icky and yucky then it was to the ocean there was a baby turtle there was another something was STUCK and the baby turtle went in it and Suffocating. Don't be a monster don't let stuff happen to Turtles because if you do you kill turtles and birds.
WALT- Use complex sentences
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